Day 29 ... NaPoWriMo / Poem-a-Day 2021

Penultimate day of National Poetry Month! Robert Lee Brewer’s Poem-a-Day prompt: “For today's prompt, write an evening poem. The evening can be a quiet and contemplative time, a stressed or fearful time, or, well, party time. Evenings can be lonely or romantic, cool or humid, inspirational or numbing. And today (or tonight, depending on when you consume your poetry prompts), evening is the time for poeming--even if you're doing it in the middle of the afternoon.” Maureen Thorson’s NaPoWriMo suggestion: “And now, for our prompt (optional, as always). This one is called 'in the window.' Imagine a window looking into a place or onto a particular scene. It could be your childhood neighbor’s workshop, or a window looking into an alien spaceship. Maybe a window looking into a witch’s gingerbread cottage, or Lord Nelson’s cabin aboard the H.M.S. Victory. What do you see? What’s going on?” Mashing up both prompts but probably not quite in the manner Robert and Maureen might have envisioned. I offer an ekphrastic tanka sequence (or linked tanka) on a famous Edward Hopper etching, in which a window and evening figure. Tryst —on Evening Wind, etching    by Edward Hopper (1921) bedsheets shape mountains of soft muslin, a landscape in a world of sleep but not yet — the evening light out the window glimmering white curtains billow like feathery angel's wings against a backdrop — inky dark heavy brick walls framing the open window she gazes outside, auburn hair hiding her face from us and yet not from someone out there, young man she’s waiting for, gentle smile her hand smooths the bed: come in, be my muse, sing me a sweet aria, velvet nocturne, till morning brings dawn’s silky serenade —Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.] Edward Hopper, Evening Wind (1921)   (WikiArt) Alan's window and evening are the wrought center of this poem, which orbits around that nexus. Evening Window From the domed hill in our backyard, one can see into the lit living room of our home, although we             keep it lit by only a single lamp and the large panel of our television. Depending on where one stands, one can perhaps peer into our dining room, through the large glass             doors, but we keep that room unlit unless we sit at the table together before twilight. Who would stand in the tangled back lot and look? Once, my father warned me that someone could wait in the back of our lot and shoot through the             kitchen window to wound me as I stood washing dishes, as he once warned me that the political stickers on my truck could lead to vandalism or even road             rage—this warning came years ago, before grievance became the primary means of             expressing political tribalism, and that Hell was a place for punishment with a wandering warden, walking to find vulnerable             suckers for eternal punishment. Who could stand back there, among the tangled honeysuckle and barbed black locust, to case our             small home where our routine has so exhausted us of stories that we search for them on pages, in recordings, through streamed feeds and not for a stranger crouched behind the elderberry, beneath the redbud? Who would say “Flowering Judas” to my neighbors and expect them to understand? —Draft by Thomas Alan Holmes    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.] Friends, won’t you comment, please? Love to know what you’re thinking. Thanks! Ingat, everyone.  ヅ

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