Robert Lee Brewer’s Poem-a-Day prompt: “[W]rite a waiting poem. It could be about waiting tables, but it can also involve any interpretation of waiting. Waiting in line at the store or for a package in the mail or whatever else someone (or something) might wait for.” Maureen Thorson’s NaPoWriMo prompt: “I’ve seen some fairly funny twitter conversations lately among poets who are coming to terms with the fact that they keep writing poems about the moon. For better or worse, the moon seems to exert a powerful hold on poets, as this large collection of moon-themed poems suggests. Today, I’d like to challenge you to stop fighting the moon. Lean in. Accept the moon. The moon just wants what’s best for you and your poems. So yes – write a poem that is about, or that involves, the moon.” Today, I offer for your perusal an ekphrastic persona poem in blank verse, combining both prompts. The Moon, Always Waiting, Speaks Here is Alan's poem today, in response to both prompts, a Petarchan sonnet. And I, Too, Am a Pocked Body of Dust If You Get Too Close Today is International Haiku Poetry Day — the 17th day of National Poetry Month (traditionally, haiku in English are made up of 17 syllables). In celebration Alan wrote a haiku on the themes of "waiting" and "the moon." Bravo, Alan!
I wrote a haiku also. Today's prompts are quite agile!
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P.S. This poem was published by the Cedar Rapids Museum of Art on 23 April 2021. Could be fastest turnaround I've had between composition and publication. Thanks, CRMA! Here's a link to the pub.
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4 comments:
I love your take on that Wood painting. The life cycle of moons from green babies to bright orbs launching themselves into the sky is inspired. I really like that eclipse haiku too - well done. Thanks for the comment on my tanka. I've since added one of my older "moon" poems you might enjoy, a legend about the Chinese poet Li Po. It's not a haiku but it kind of resembles a string of them, with short tercets.
Bruce, thanks. Did you understand that the green babies are the trees in the background? The moon doesn't completely understand how things work on Earth. I'll come look at your older moon poems.
Oh yeah, I got that. I figured you were riffing a little on Wood's style, and I liked the fantasy element of it all.
I also really like Alan's haiku. It has a kind of cosmic/mystic feel.
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