The Stafford Challenge, Day 18

Had an MRI scan today, my doc trying to figure out what's causing this sciatica pain I've had for over a month now. I wrote about that yesterday in a shadorma. Today's poem is a hay(na)ku sonnet, a form I invented, based on the hay(na)ku form, in turn invented by Eileen Tabios: a word-counting form where the first line in a tercet is one word, the second line two words, and the third line three words. My sonnet variation is made up of four hay(na)ku stanzas followed by a squished hay(na)ku — three words per line — thus ending up with the requisite 14 lines. Today I'm using Bruce Niedt's rhyme scheme for the hay(na)ku sonnet, where the last word of each hay(na)ku is rhymed as well as the ending couplet: xxa xxa xxb xxb cc. During an MRI Scan — a hay(na)ku sonnet Ring, long tube of magnetic force. Inside this cylinder — blam! — new universe, rock and roll soundtrack: Bad Company. Dream spaceship piercing plastic wormhole highway. Sciatica pain unfurled: auspicious new world. —Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.] Friends, won’t you comment, please? Love to know what you’re thinking. Ingat, everyone.  ヅ