Friday, April 4, 2025

Day 4 ... NaPoWriMo / Poem-a-Day 2025 // Stafford 78


Robert Lee Brewer’s Poem-a-Day prompt: “write an unexpected mess poem. Like maybe somebody spills their milk or forgets to put away the groceries. Or maybe the dog leaves a present. Or perhaps the cat is in a gift-giving mood as well. Or maybe the mess is a little more situational (like falling behind on paying the bills or getting caught up in a love triangle.”

Maureen Thorson’s NaPoWriMo prompt: “It’s the rare human structure – be it a bedroom, kitchen, dentist’s office, or classroom – that doesn’t have art on its walls, even if it’s only the photos on a calendar. Today, we’d like to challenge you to write your own poem about living with a piece of art.”


Today, I'm mixing the prompts in a doidotsu — a Japanese poetic form with four lines of 7, 7, 7, and 5 syllables, respectively. Here's a write-up on the doidotsu: https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/dodoitsu-poetic-forms.

Abstract Expressionism
—a doidotsu
At my home, mail and clutter
are an unexpected mess,
Jackson Pollock art piece . . . just
gotta live with it!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

In case someone doesn't know abstract expressionist Jackson Pollock's artwork, here's an example.


Jackson Pollock, "Convergence" (1952)

Here's Alan's poem today. His title reflects both prompts.



P O E M   R E M O V E D

while being submitted for publication.

 

Please come back later. The poem may
return at some time in the future.

Thank you!

 
 

Friends, won’t you comment, please? Love to know what you’re thinking. Thanks!

Ingat, everyone.   


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