Maureen Thorson’s NaPoWriMo prompt: “write a poem that features forgotten technology. Maybe it’s a VCR, or a rotary phone. A cassette player or even a radio.”
Robert Lee Brewer’s Poem-a-Day prompt: “write an exotic poem. Set your poem in an exotic locale. Or maybe write about an exotic person, animal, or technology. And remember that your everyday things may be exotic to someone else. Honestly, I’ve found poets are a breed of exotic creature whenever I’m in a room full of ‘normal’ adults.”
My poem today — a sonnet made of seven couplets, a Clarean sonnet — considers "trusty old tech" and "exotic new" tech in the face of COVID-19.
Remedies
Ice licking the windows? We’ll pack a sweater.
Snow drifting across the driveway? Better
break out the snow shovel. In June when sirens
scream of tornadoes, we troop to the basement.
Back in the ’50s and ’60s when highway deaths
were increasing, we invented seat belts.
But now we’ve got a new insidious threat:
deadly invisible foe that flies on our breath.
All our sweaters and shovels, sirens and
seat belts — all that trusty old tech — just can’t
help. Can we invent exotic new machines?
Microscopic nanobots cruising our veins,
hunting the virus? An avant-garde vaccine?
Don’t know what, but we better do it soon.
—Draft by Vince Gotera [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]
I really appreciate Alan's poem today because it draws from the music I grew up listening to.
I Was Exotic and Far Away
and had an orange plastic transistor radio
that received only AM frequencies
from the stations in town, one of which
played music in the top 40 format
so that I heard a lot of pop and rock
songs about people who wrote letters
or waited for letters. People would write
disc jockeys at radio stations and ask
them to play favorite songs. People
would plead with postmen to double check
their mailbags for letters from faraway loves.
Some would get a letter and drop everything
to get a plane ticket because a plane was not
fast enough to return to a lover. Later,
I would write letters to a girl who lived across town,
even though I saw her every day at school,
just so she had something that said how I felt,
something to keep in a drawer.
—Draft by Thomas Alan Holmes [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]
Did you recognize songs in the poem? Fun to connect up the titles. Stay safe out there, everyone!
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2 comments:
Ha! I wrote a rhyming hay(na)ku sonnet for today (Day 18), before reading this, and guess what my first rhymes were? "Sweater" and "better" - great minds think alike! Great sonnet, by the way.
Bruce, I just read and commented on that poem. Great job! Thanks for the good word. Working on a sestina for the 19th. I bet you are too!
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