Wednesday, May 21, 2025

The Stafford Challenge, Days 116-125 — More Shadormas


Here are eight days' worth of poems in The Stafford Challenge. All shadormas, like in the last post — nine of them.


On Day 116, 12 May 2025, continuing with shadormas. I bought this bass because I'm having surgery in ten days and my doc said I couldn't carry more than 10 pounds during my recovery. Basses are often heavier than that, but not this one.

New Bass: Six-String Longhorn

New turquoise
Jerry Jones Bass VI.
Having it
converted
to BEADGC.
Gonna be sweet. Rock!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

The letters in the penultimate line refer to tuning, from lowest string to highest. The bass is currently tuned to E standard (EADGBE) one octave lower than a guitar. After it's converted, the lowest string will be 5 semitones lower, tuned like a 5-string bass with an extra higher string.






On Day 117, 13 May 2025, our Stafford Challenge small group had a Zoom meeting this morning where we wrote for seven minutes and shared. I wrote a longish paragraph about a visual memory and then ended with a shadorma. Here it is, slightly edited.

In Morning Sun

Glowing disk,
corner of my eye,
gold halo
on the wall,
bright wheel of thin laser beams,
some small spider's home.

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

Here's a picture that looks a lot like what I saw that morning in the early '90s.


Photo by sogirsikder on Pixabay




On Day 118, 14 May 2025, shadorma again today. They're addicting! Looked out the window for this one.

Time

Old willow
outside hangs green leaves.
Long twigs sway.
Up high, dead
branches. What has this tree glimpsed
over its long years?

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

The actual tree.




On Day 119, 15 May 2025, today's shadorma is on the same topic as yesterday's — the willow tree in my partner Renee's backyard. I found out today that it grew from the side of the stump of a willow that had been felled thirty or more years ago. The phrase "long years" alludes to yesterday's poem.

Phoenix

This willow
was resurrected,
it turns out.
She grew from
a cut-down old willow's stump,
her long years doubled.

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

Here's a picture of the willow tree's trunk. The stump it grew from was where the greenery is in the foreground. The stump is now gone, disintegrated over several decades since the old tree was cut down and the new tree (now old) has grown.





On Day 120, 16 May 2025, using Robert Lee Brewer's Write Better Poetry Wednesday prompt 738 from this week: "a sleep poem." Again, a shadorma, using some strong enjambments.

Dreamless

Deep sleep . . . dream?
Gone. A faint feeling
that something
happened, then
faded. Car . . . hill . . . rain . . . sliding . . .
what? Sleep slip per y . . .


—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

Photo by gaborszoke from Pixabay.com




On Day 121, 17 May 2025, had writer's block today, so did the Stafford thing for today's shadorma.

Bill's Advice

Writer's block?
Lower your standards.
Still got it?
Just lower
them some more. William Stafford,
that's genius. It works!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

Photo from Lewis & Clark




On Day 122, 18 May 2025, rote this shadorma in a moving car . . . very literal!

Heading to a Gig

Caravan
on the road again:
world-famous
Byron's Bar
in Pomeroy. Deja Blue
rarin' to rock out!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

Actual photo from the road just now. Our band gear
is in that van up ahead, driven by our saxophonist.

Here are photos of the flyers from Byron's for our show tonight:


   





On Day 123, 19 May 2025, yup, it's a shadorma! The line breaks ended up being very useful!

On an Online Article About the
4 Signs of Unconditional Love


The first sign:
"Having your boo's back!"
Renee loves
washing my back.
I love to soap hers. Our love's
unconditional!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

Photo from Pixabay.com (no photographer given)

I wrote two shadormas today. In The Stafford Challenge facebook group, people were writing hippo poems. Here's mine. I've been sticking to one poem a day in the group, but what the hey.

Syllables

The count in
"hippopotamus"
is just right
for — uh-huh! —
shadormas. Exactly five:
"hippopotamus"!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]

And in addition, an internal rhyme between "shadormas" and "hippopotamus." Woo-hoo!





On Day 124, 20 May 2025, a primer on the shadorma, in the shape of a shadorma.

How to Write a Shadorma

It's easy.
Just count syllables:
3 5 3
3 7
5. But be eloquent — fast —
'cause there's not much room!

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]





On Day 125, 21 May 2025, a little shadorma fun.

Shaking the Shadorma

My name's Vince,
shadormaholic.
I can't stop
writing them!
Shadorma Shanonymous . . .
where are you fine folks?

—Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.]





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