The Stafford Challenge, Day 24

My girlfriend Renee and I were at the Hearst Art Center's opening of a photography show today, and we came upon a magnetic poetry board, with movable words and parts of fantasy creatures: feathered torsos, shark heads, quetzalcoatl wings, and so on. Totally legit for an art center named for a poet, James Hearst! Here's the little poem I "wrote" on that board. Took about a minute or minute-and-a half. It's not a haiku, technically, but it does feature 5/7/5 syllables, and a title, as well as monorhyme, so a micropoem, I guess. Enjoy! Four-Eyed Snail ferocious linger vision caramel sister velvet blaze breezer —Draft by Vince Gotera    [Do not copy or quote . . . thanks.] Magnetic Poetry Board, Hearst Art Center Friends, won’t you comment, please? Love to know what you’re thinking. Ingat, everyone.  ヅ