Day 6 . . . 1/5 of the way through April! Robert Lee Brewer’s Poem-a-Day suggestion: “For today's prompt, write a minimum poem.” Maureen Thorson’s NaPoWriMo prompt: “[W]rite a poem rooted in ‘weird wisdom,’ by which we mean something objectively odd that someone told you once, and that has stuck with you ever since. Need an example? Check out Naomi Shihab Nye’s poem ‘Making a Fist.’” My poem today is a tanka, a small Japanese poetic form. I'm using the traditional format for the English tanka: syllable patterns of 5-7-5-7-7. I should note that many contemporary tanka writers no longer use this shape. I'm merging prompts as usual: a poem that's minimum in size if not importance and also something my father told me over and over when I was a child, that has stuck with me all my life. Papa's mantra: “You Image by Mohamed Hassan from Pixabay Friends, won’t you comment, please? Love to know what you’re thinking. Thanks! Ingat, everyone. ヅ |
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3 comments:
Nice
Well done. You effectively communicated the impact of your father's words within the format of a tanka. I especially like "Brown Sun."
Jennifer
I concur. Succinct and effective.
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