tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post6900075083634282635..comments2024-03-27T04:16:08.541-05:00Comments on The Man with the Blue Guitar: Wound, Burn, Glacier: A Poetry ExerciseVince Goterahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-21294522041287161232022-11-28T10:31:01.551-06:002022-11-28T10:31:01.551-06:00off white outlet
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I really appreciate the seriousness of the poems, how they deal with such personal topics with dignity and elegance. <br /><br />Could I possibly feature these two pieces in a continuation blog post? In fact, if you want try the exercise once more, it might be interesting to see what other beauty you might create.<br /><br />Let me know, won't you?Vince Goterahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-29362090908192668642011-07-19T13:17:24.628-05:002011-07-19T13:17:24.628-05:00Thank you. My name is Catherine Childress. I am a ...Thank you. My name is Catherine Childress. I am a graduate student at East Tennessee State University. childress@goldmail.etsu. edu I actually ended up with what I think is a much better poem using this exercise. I would be happy to hear from you. Thank you again for your kind assessment of my work. <br /><br /><br />This is the poem that resulted from working with this exercise and a little more time :<br /><br />Oeuvre <br /><br />A real boyfriend would’ve cared I was only twelve,<br />that it would be a long time before I wasn’t jailbait,<br />never had a slow, wet kiss full of wrestling tounges,<br />been able to find my G-spot or even know I had one,<br />that what he had planned for the backseat would wound <br />more than the pink crescent between baby-fat legs. <br />A minute of his own pleasure would remove the thin layer<br />of dignity I cleaved to with the zeal of backwoods religion,<br />sacrificed for a few quick, dry strokes of his manhood.<br />Would have offered a grease rag for the blood and comfort<br />in his arms, instead of flopping his chest on top of me<br />again and again pounding out his body of work.Catherinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-45512377260626083842011-06-28T22:29:12.397-05:002011-06-28T22:29:12.397-05:00Anonymous, I wish I knew who you were (are). This ...Anonymous, I wish I knew who you were (are). This is quite good ... stands up well to the others above. I really like "croon clear the blighted artery." Would you leave your name? Or get hold of me some other way? Thanks.Vince Goterahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-26175339740671101042011-06-26T13:30:44.847-05:002011-06-26T13:30:44.847-05:00I am a graduate student in literature and creative...I am a graduate student in literature and creative writing. I have been looking for things to pull me out of my comfort zone, so to speak. This is a great exercise. Although I wouldn't hold my effort up against the ones posted above, I thought I would share what your exact exercise and 10 or fifteen minutes yielded for me. <br /><br /><br />Ragdoll<br /><br />Peace eludes her hard earned sleep, <br />she lashes out incoherent words, flailing <br />limbs tell long buried secrets of a past <br />he tries to whisper away with hush nows, <br />there theres, croon clear the blighted artery <br />of memory that burns clean to the surface - <br />a childhood. Family forgotten by light, encircles <br />her with startling clarity in the void of night <br />wild as the twisted vines, heavy with grapes, <br />where she blinked tears drawn by mama’s hand, <br />clinging to crushed remnants of whiskey-free days, <br />stroking the pale straw hair of a faceless doll.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-52406193965931460852011-05-31T22:19:13.157-05:002011-05-31T22:19:13.157-05:00Mandy, no, it worked out perfect. What you wrote s...Mandy, no, it worked out perfect. What you wrote shows what the larger possibilities are for such an exercise <i>outside</i> of a class. So that's great ... and THANKS!Vince Goterahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-4333135380930932842011-05-31T15:46:21.790-05:002011-05-31T15:46:21.790-05:00I love the varied results. Such an interesting exe...I love the varied results. Such an interesting exercise. Thanks for letting me participate, even if I couldn't do it in the original spirit of the assignment! - Mandymandy!https://www.blogger.com/profile/18389223438935972647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-64069492390010786482011-05-31T13:18:57.618-05:002011-05-31T13:18:57.618-05:00Erin: Thanks! Wouldn't have worked half as wel...Erin: Thanks! Wouldn't have worked half as well without your cool text. Glad you liked how it worked out. --VinceVince Goterahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-31489177986908419052011-05-30T18:40:15.327-05:002011-05-30T18:40:15.327-05:00Very interesting results, Vince! Your exercise not...Very interesting results, Vince! Your exercise not only conveys the potency of language, but of rhythm—and of course the inextricable relationship between prose and poetry. (When the words I want aren't coming, I dose up on poetry.)Erin McReynoldshttp://traumafordummies.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com