tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post3412309418098615..comments2024-03-27T04:16:08.541-05:00Comments on The Man with the Blue Guitar: Day Four ... NaPoWriMo / Poem-a-Day 2017Vince Goterahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-63288539795305682052017-04-05T19:19:08.955-05:002017-04-05T19:19:08.955-05:00I confess that it took me a bit of sleep this afte...I confess that it took me a bit of sleep this afternoon to make my way through the fog.Thomas Alan Holmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17937149450018575538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-13305774997155108682017-04-05T17:47:49.443-05:002017-04-05T17:47:49.443-05:00Okay, I get it now. Can't believe how thick I ...Okay, I get it now. Can't believe how thick I was. First name "sputtering duck", last name rhymes with "rump".Bruce Niedthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974369288649730186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-75325775473184873352017-04-05T11:02:27.940-05:002017-04-05T11:02:27.940-05:00Very nice Vince. I felt the first sonnet was speak...Very nice Vince. I felt the first sonnet was speaking to an ideal imperiled by a certain "ump" rhyme.<br />Yours was more cryptic, though the first line seems to indicate a connection to Alan's subject.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174402226351583815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-11963343215371555892017-04-05T10:24:35.003-05:002017-04-05T10:24:35.003-05:00I think I get it now. I haven't figured out ea...I think I get it now. I haven't figured out each reference but I see the common thread. "Sputtering, duck" got me going. <br /><br />Bruce Niedthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974369288649730186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-36119036931088333312017-04-05T05:18:24.387-05:002017-04-05T05:18:24.387-05:00Each line of mine refers to a different person but...Each line of mine refers to a different person but they all share something. And that something is also shared but in a different way with the unmentioned element in Alan's poem. I don't know if that helps, Bruce?<br />Vince Goterahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10873850315003080382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3507971738519746004.post-15353826550428723142017-04-04T23:42:17.444-05:002017-04-04T23:42:17.444-05:00Love the poem, Vince, but frankly I'm stumped ...Love the poem, Vince, but frankly I'm stumped as to the answer to the riddle. Maybe a more obvious clue?Bruce Niedthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974369288649730186noreply@blogger.com